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How She Paints Her Mask by *BryarRose:iconBryarRose:



Careful brush strokes
With a fine-tipped painter’s tool,
Create the perfect face.
Lining the eyes, blushing the cheeks,
Shading lips to brilliant red.

Painting on more than color:
False smiles and confidence,
Lies, cheats, and alterations.
When the painting is done,
She is not the same woman.

Concealing hopes and dreams,
Feigning interests and beliefs,
Pretending, always pretending.
As her mask hides her true face,
The face of a lonely child.

The mask does its job perfectly,
Not a hair out of place,
Not a hint of her real feelings.
And once painted on,
Her mask is impossible to remove.

June 13, 2008
©2008-2009 *BryarRose
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Author's Comments

I absolutely love this painting [link] done by :iconliviera-jetter: and I received her permission a while ago to write a poem similar to it, but it took me a while to get around to it.

Tell me what you think.

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:iconsimpsonsfreakrj:
that is a really good poem It reminds me of what my english teacher said about people who are depressed. Keep up the good work.

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Face it the Simpsons rule :devil:
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I'm a Kingdom Hearts fan so what!!!
:icon1likeme:
this is a really great poem=D

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I came here to kick ass and drink cups of tea

and I'm all out of tea
:iconmills-and-boon:
Well, I llike it. It's chilling, it makes me think of people I know.

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-I'd rather be happy than right anyday.
-Beauty is in the eye of the beer holder.
-And Logic says, "Fuck this, I'm out of here."
:iconbryarrose:
Thank you.

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I have completed my Portfolio.
:iconbryarrose:
Thanks.

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I have completed my Portfolio.
:iconbryarrose:
As long as it doesn't remind you of yourself.

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I have completed my Portfolio.
:iconmills-and-boon:
Sometimes.but i suppose it's everyone at somestage.

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-I'd rather be happy than right anyday.
-Beauty is in the eye of the beer holder.
-And Logic says, "Fuck this, I'm out of here."
:iconyazimika:
i really like this poem. makes me think of all the hollow ppl at school.

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I Have A Right To My Anger, And I Dont Want Anybody Telling Me That I Shouldn't Be, That Its Not Nice To Be, And That Somethings Wrong With Me Because I Get Angry. - Maxine Waters
:iconliviera-jetter:
Wow, I love this. Totally how I feel about putting on makeup some days.

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