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The Empty Road by *BryarRose:iconBryarRose:



Treading aimlessly down the forgotten path,
I have never paused to breathe in the flowers.
But now I stop and look around,
Only to find I am once again alone.

Many others have crossed this way,
And some walked my side long enough to be called friends.
But now they have all gone their own directions,
And I cannot remember why I began this course.

Though the road is now empty, in the distance is a Light.
I can barely see it from where I stand in twilight.
But there is nobody to guide me, I cannot know.
And so I make my decision, hoping to find what I seek.

I am unsure, and cautious, and even terrified,
But I have no reason not to go. And no reason to stay.
And so now I am walking toward the Unknown,
Leaving behind old paths and old ways. Old friends.

I do not know if I will meet anyone along the way,
And I cannot promise the faint Glow is not a fantasy.
Still, I change my bearing, in hopes of finally resting.
Of finally finding where I am supposed to be.

July 27, 2008
©2008-2009 *BryarRose
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:iconsimplecomics:
very nice. i really like this one. it's kinda sad, but not really. it's hard to explain. :) I guess i just like it :)

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:iconsara-rodgers:
Oooh, I like this one a lot!! :D It feels like...moving on, or something. Closure, and a new beginning. :) :+fav:

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:iconyazimika:
this kinda reminds me of my current situation. not very dramatic in my case, just transferring schools and maybe moving, but i feel lost nonetheless.
its really well worded. i love it ur a really good poet

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Thank you very much. I love knowing people can relate to my work.

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:iconbryarrose:
Yeah, I hope so. :) This one is actually about me.

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:iconsara-rodgers:
I thought so:nod: This poem seems very "real" in its emotion--I hope everything goes well for you! :hug:

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:iconghost47:
i absolutely love this. the extended metaphor, the images used... just lovely.

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i cant seem to find the right words to comment this...

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:iconyazimika:
i bet a lot of ppl can relate to this one! everyone feels lost and confused at some point. some more than others. we all question our choices but in the end hopefully it'll turn out well enough

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