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The Perfect Painting by *BryarRose:iconBryarRose:



Why not? Why not?
I did it exactly the same.
I loved it, caressed it,
Copied it just the same.
Same, but so different.
Yours is perfect!
Why isn't mine?
I see the same picture,
Same medium, technique, lighting.
But yours is perfect
And mine is not.
Why are they not the same?
No one else can see the difference.
They cannot tell them apart.
But yours is so very perfect.
And mine is so very...not.

January 9, 2008
©2008-2009 *BryarRose
:iconbryarrose:

Author's Comments

Aww...the mind of an artist. Not a great poem, sorry. My writing abilities were stretched to the limit that day.

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:iconsimplecomics:
Is this poem aimed at anyone in particular?

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SIMPLE COMPLICATIONS
CIRCLE CITY
:icone2love:
Girl ! I FEEL YO PAIN ! Been there ! ............A feww times !
:iconcgsantos:
i think its pretty good, and i've tryed to do that once but it was bad... my copying skills suck =P

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*BLANK*:stupidme:
:iconbryarrose:
I know what you mean. But I keep on trying.

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I have completed my Portfolio.
:iconcatpenguin:
Very ture. Good writing.

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O hi, so I... Oh no, damn it, DAMN IT, right foot falling asleEEEEP AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!
:iconyazimika:
well..i dont really have advanced critique...but its very interesting...im well aquianted with that feeling

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I Have A Right To My Anger, And I Dont Want Anybody Telling Me That I Shouldn't Be, That Its Not Nice To Be, And That Somethings Wrong With Me Because I Get Angry. - Maxine Waters

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